[原创]感受春天——读陆军的诗

寂然

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 130pt; mso-char-indent-count: 5.0; mso-char-indent-size: 26.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; FONT-FAMILY: 方正舒体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">感受春天</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 方正舒体;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 192.75pt; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; mso-char-indent-size: 16.05pt;"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">——读陆军的诗</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 192pt; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; mso-char-indent-size: 16.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 115.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 11.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">陆军是近年来天台县诗歌创作风头较健的青年作者之一，诗作也常见诸于报刊和网络，其题材也是丰富多彩，有咏物的，也有寄志的；有大写意的，有很小资的。他的诗讲究内韵与外韵的和谐，根据诗歌的题材，而采取不同的诗意表达方式。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">如他的《隋塔印象》（该诗收录《天台山诗联选注》）一诗中写道：“</span><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">缘何而来</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">癫僧执破扇的手</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
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                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">摊开来</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">卷上石梁瀑赤城霞琼台月</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">和桃源传说</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">寒山子</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">笃笃的木屐之歌</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">裹紧了往东横山的平上一烙</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">顿时引得始丰水垂涎滔滔</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">……</span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">从来没有一位诗人这样去写千年的隋塔，在诗中没有隋塔的身躯伟岸，也没有衰草残砖的沧桑，而是以一种大写意的和笔调去抒发隋塔眼中曾经有过的那些文化痕迹，通过塔头风、华顶云、石梁瀑、……等空间的流动，去映衬隋塔那千百年的风霜雪雨。与其说诗人在讴颂隋塔，到不如说是在借隋塔来传达内心对博大精深天台山文化的追寻与赞美。诗人思绪纵横，想象奇诡。诗中情感的涌动是高山流泉，气韵虹贯，从一个独特的视角去讴歌古塔的浓厚的文化内涵。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">陆军的诗除了有大气磅薄的，也有很清新很细腻的。如不久前在“天台之窗”的网上读到《那年春天》：“</span><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">那年春天</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">细雨没经商量</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">就将整个山谷的桃花点燃</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红色的火焰</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">从四面八方包夹着你</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">要把所有的绿</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                </font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">赶进你纤瘦的背景……”</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这是一首与《隋塔》完全不同风格的诗。诗句极富感染力，了了几笔，如是下了阵阵刷刷细雨，将一个在春雨中的桃花尽染的山谷涌现在眼前。我们能感受到扑面而来的那湿漉漉的春雨，以及在细雨中飞扬的桃花，能闻到带有草叶桃花和雨雾的气息，而所有的笔墨在最后只是归集于“你纤瘦的身影”。这似乎是一首写春天爱情的诗，又似乎不是。其实是不是写爱情已不是很重要，令我们惊异的是那一瞬间的情感渲泻和直逼心间的浓郁诗韵。在诗人眼中，“那年春天”是他对某种美好的憧憬和向往。在这首诗中，他的笔触似乎很敏感，也很纤细，如是露水在绿叶上滑落的那份颤抖，在这片飞红流翠的春意里，给人以含有一丝惆怅的憧憬。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这两首诗在语言、节奏与情感把握上，风格绝然不同，体现了诗人丰富的情感和娴熟的诗歌创作技巧。我们欣然期待在他的新诗中的感受那草色青青细雨如诗的春天。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
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abracadabra

个人觉得，陆军这种风格更接近散文诗的意思。

一诺千金

<p>卖糕的</p><p>偶好不容易能看懂的诗</p><p>ab居然说是散文诗</p><p>什么意思啊！</p><p>就不是诗了啊！</p>

abracadabra

<p>楼上的，急啥？我只是细分了一下，散文诗，当然是诗了。</p>

一诺千金

<p>哦，那就好</p><p>总算有看的懂滴诗了！</p>

归于宁静

<p>关于散文诗与诗</p><p>艾略特说：其中绝对的区别是诗由诗写成，散文由散文写成；或者说，其他根本上的区别尚待我们去寻求。</p><p>哈哈，晕吧，跟废话似的结论</p><p>其实吧，散文诗是诗的裸体美</p><p></p><p></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-8 22:38:55编辑过]

一诺千金

<p>裸体美啊</p><p>那肯定美的啊！</p>

阳光明媚

<p>那年春天，估计是写于认识某MM之后吧。</p><p>看不懂他的诗，但是他人却很随和。</p><p>顺便说一句，我想他也应该写那些格律要求很严的古体诗吧。不懂这些不好乱说的。前阵子知道他在这逛过，却不知道他是否常来？让他自己来贴他其他的作品啊，应该有不少的。</p><p>上次他们在华顶办了一个活动，很成功的，特别是他的那个朗诵，个人感觉比另一个人要好很多啊。</p><p></p>

龙头

<p>呵呵，果然是高人，</p><p>诗歌源于生活，</p><p>脱离了生活的讴歌，</p><p>注定难以令人懂得其中的奥妙。</p><p>像这类的散文诗，却似乎很平易近人。</p><p>让我们能看得懂，又有想像的空间。</p>

不戒

<p><font size="5">隋塔印象</font></p><p><font size="5">手势好像在做饺饼筒</font></p>